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I’m sorry to be the messenger of bad news, but I suspect this work will not be finished by him:

https://www.davidrevoy.com/article1021/goodbye-craig-maloney

Currently on page 26 - this is very readable! The lore information feels pretty efficient, we definitely get bogged down in that section in some books.

Typo note: on page 25 it says:

By default, your refresh starts at three and is reduced by one for each stunt after the first three you choose—essentially, your first three stunts are free!

…and on page 26 it says:

If you’re all experienced, and you want to start with more powerful characters, just take all three to start and off you go.

…but just after that it says:

We allow your character up to four stunts before requiring you to spend refresh. This means your character may start with two school stunts and two stunts of their own. (This allows you one more stunt than the standard three stunts of Fate Core.)

I assume the two-school, two-custom is the correct one, and the other parts are copy+paste errors. Might also affect the advice about how many stunts to prepare at the beginning for beginners, but we haven’t gotten to the information about school stunts yet.

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Thank you for the feedback!

Yes, it’s supposed to be four stunts in total. I’ll need to update those sections, and perhaps add some additional guidance in the beginning.

Thanks again! I appreciate it!

I'm interested to see where this goes and enjoying my read. But correct me if i'm mistaken but it looks like the PDF repeats itself?

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Wow. Thanks for catching that. I wondered why it ballooned to over 400 pages. :)

Insert witty joke about double-checking.

I’ll see if I can fix it. Thanks again.

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It should be fixed now. Thank you!